i'd love to see a few of the images i'm guess you are referring to? although it's somewhat interesting to imagine them--there's a nice terseness in this response...you position yourself confidently which i think is comforting as a reader. the negative space is also effective...there's an epic-ness that you reject via small interjections. you deflate. you don't have time. you defer to ritual. your growing confidence as an experimental writer is empowering--keep going kevin don't let the class ending stop this visual/textual response/call !
i'd love to see a few of the images i'm guess you are referring to? although it's somewhat interesting to imagine them--there's a nice terseness in this response...you position yourself confidently which i think is comforting as a reader. the negative space is also effective...there's an epic-ness that you reject via small interjections. you deflate. you don't have time. you defer to ritual. your growing confidence as an experimental writer is empowering--keep going kevin don't let the class ending stop this visual/textual response/call !
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